Posted at December 5, 2005, 8:40 pm:
Hellow, fellow artists. I am Ryn, 17 from Canada. Art has been a big part of my life since I was a young lass, but I've been really focusing on improving in the last year or two. Critiques would be greatly appreciated! Feel free to be brutally honest - my only concern is progress. Thanks for looking!
I'll start things off with some older CGs. Haven't been doing much digital stuff these days.
And some sketchbook stuff. These are all done between now and August. I've tried to organize them from oldest to newest.
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5...avender3ab.jpg
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3198/sb22gu.jpg
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/89/sb17us.jpg
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8905/sb33ub.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/1051/sb46ke.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6302/sb100ke.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6876/sb62um.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/4676/sb55kp.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/60/sb70ua.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/9515/sb89ss.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/860/sb117gn.jpg
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Replies:hey awsome work, love the most of your stuff
the first image and the ...
hey nice stuff!! the cartoons are cute!
I'm really really ashamed of how bad these studies are, but I realize ...
awesome stuff, you are doing all the right things, maybe a few more me...
16?
and you draw like that?
M.
Hello, Ryn, I'm deeply impressed.
wow, that third one from the top is an excellent rendering.
Wow this is nice stuff especially from a 16 year old! (I wish I had so...
Dire - You're absolutely right, I don't draw nearly enough men.
Alrighty, here's today's.
Gah, lack of updates.
16.
Nice work thus far.
Gah, been a while since I updated.
ryn these animal studies are quite amazing.
Thanks for the encouragement, guys.
I'm really blown away this time.
solid drawings!
Aww, bunnies.
Fantastic stuff! Really impressive.
Thanks a bunch, everyone!
WOW amazing stuff man! as has been said the fact that you are 16 and y...
Hi Ryn,
:0 your digitals are impressive.
Post more colored images They are really cool! Especially the girl in...
Hmm lovely drawings you got here.
Here's a new one.
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Great stuff, especially, because of your age, you motivate me a lot mo...
I'm really glad I could offer some motivation, Gamerhomie.
wonderfull stuff !!
Huh, then we have similar interests.
I certainly will.
wow, very cool sketchbook! Lovin this painting http://img236.
quite good, especially for a 16 y.
Hay, you got some good stuff in here.
Hey these are really cool, uve got great potential for someone ur age.
Ryn-Some pretty good stuff you have started there.
Great stuff Ryn, some nice studies.
Thanks a bunch for the kind words, everyone.
Some self portraits.
Face studies and a self portrait.
Nice work so far, there's been a big improvement in your portraits so ...
Thank you very much for the advice, Big-Dave!
It's nice to hear my por...
One more before bed.
Cool, works, the digital pieces are very good.
Hey I like ur sketches.
wow, your artwork is really impressive, i like alot.
Thanks guys!
Imageshack was down last night, so I couldn't upload my ...
nice portraits.
Yeah, I'll draw different types of body types once I get to my figure ...
Update, finally.
Hi, thanks for the comment on my SB.
You're right, scorpion007.
Hey, I've looked at your art a couple of times and it's really good! Y...
The otherwise daily nature of my sketchbook will be slowed until after...
hey Rye.
Emperor- Thank you for the encouragement.
Neww srtuff
really good life drawing, mostly well proportioned.
figures look great.
Lot of nice stuff, I like your sb.
U r doing great buddy.
New stuff.
ANATOMY, ILL EAT , CHOP ANATOMY.
HEROIC- yeah, the anatomy on that one sucks.
Today's life drawing class.
LIFE DRWAINGS input
ooo ya baby.
Great stuff Ryn! I like the muscle study you posted a while back, and ...
HEROIC - My life drawing class actually doesn't have a teacher, just s...
Bah.
heyooo
yeeeih, i was busy with da skool too, lotssa things to hand...
Man.
yUr life drwaing has come along real good since u started the sb.
The kittyseed picture made me laugh
Your characters are really nice,...
HEROIC - Thanks for the crits.
Hey Ryn! Thanks for the comments in my SB a while back.
The result of my math/history classes.
WOOT love these two 1, 2
can i have ur autograph plZZZ? and maybe a ...
I really like your stuff.
HEROIC - Glad you like the new stuff! And thanks for stopping by so mu...
Meant to update these last night, but I fell asleep in the late aftern...
Tonight's batch, crits appreciated.
Really great sketchbook
AMAZINGLY great updates.
HEROIC - Glad you like the new stuff! The darker drawings are inks, do...
Sweet and smelly.
Good stuff here, designs for everyone look very unique, only thing id ...
A bunch of crap from school yesterday.
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I drew for 6-7 hours today.
LONG TIME< aye, *slap slap me* -__-
after the portfolio subm...
HEROIC - Huh, I didn't know you play WoW .
Hey Ryn! 'Sup.
Cool, Thanks a lot for that paintover, Cuppajoe! I knew the nose was t...
Hello, I really enjoy looking at you sketchbook, mainly because you ac...
Woot, ISNT IT RYN the great artist, with those OMGBBQ looking characte...
your pencil shading skills are fantastic for your age.
You have improved dramatically from the first page keep up the work I...
nice work, keep it up, you're improving.
MAN! It's been forever since I've updated, between spring break and pl...
Hey man.
Cool update Ryn! I really dig that one at the top.
Oh, geez.
Fantastic work here! You have an amazing talent!
Your last post really shows some strong improvements, I love the cryst...
Thanks a bunch, guys!
Here's today's.
Sweet, a Ryn update! I guess I missed the last one.
sweet , love the expression, love the anatomy.
I feel so sick today.
nice Update, really good, that even wen u are sick, still drwaing
...
More great stuff.
HEROIC - Thanks a lot for checking in, again.
Improvement is all I can see.
As bhanu said.
I really like that japanese building.
Sweet stuff! Those hands are looking great Ryn! No crits here, just ke...
Yay, thanks a lot, guys! Here's some stuff for tonight.
nice concept stuff.
Well, damn.
Thanks for the tips in my SB Ryn! The fish from yesterday is my favori...
Yay, page 3!
Cuppajoe - You're right about the lines vs lightlights t...
nice SP.
I see improvement here over the previous two pages particularly with y...
I really envy your flexability with drawing different species of.
Thanks a bunch for the tips and encouragement, guys.
Okay.
Hey Ryn! Thanks for stopping by my SB! See, that's why I didn't get Wo...
Joe - I'd like to have my portfolio done and sent in mid/late October,...
Hands are looking good for the most part! Remember that they have prop...
From what I glanced at with that link, that looks cool.
Yesterday's stuff.
Hey Ryn! The first page is cool (especially that creepy head in the mi...
Hey, great improvments over the last page! Your lines are becoming mor...
Sweetass sketchbook, sorry I missed it before!
Been making very strong...
Man.
Oh boy.
Hey, really cool stuff Ryn, You already pointed out what's wrong with
...
Hey Ryn, wanted to show some pre-workshop love! The first thing my ey...
Something I drew, trying to take Zord's advice to keep things loose.
Woohaw.
Missed a few!
On the 18th its appaerant you started watching face pro...
watch out for the proportions.
awesome stuff! I'm seeing lots of improvement! I wish I could draw lik...
Thanks a lot for the tips and crits, guys.
The left eye is throwing off the whole thing.
Looking good, dont think the eye bothers much.
Gilbert IS coot.
kicking -_____-'' *feeling like suicide*
brrrrr.
Your beginning to think alot more about proportions, and it really sho...
I saw a post of yours in the ringling thread so i thought I'd give you...
Astounding improvement.
wow.
Sorry, no time for comment responses atm.
I don’t really have any drawing experience but I wanted to share...
Biiiig improvement in that last one Ryn! Man, the workshop sounds like...
Leaps and bounds of improvement in the last pic.
Mebbe try doing a larger variety of features? Especially your lips see...
Thanks a lot for the comments and critiques, guys!
Greensock, you'...
[Art has been a big part of my life since I was a young lass, but I've...
I hope you saw as much of an improvement in these as I did.
oooooooooooh.
Great update Ryn! I especially like the faces on the next to last page...
Love the picture on the bib.
Greensock - You sir, are an epic critiquer.
hehe very cute walruses (walrii?) and monkey thing again! Looks like y...
They end this Friday, the 23rd.
I like those walrusses! (is it walrii? I got to check that up.
Well Ryn, you have shown great improvement since you began this sketch...
That last page is very nice ,the meeting walruses are cute .
Yesterday's DSG.
Hey Ryn! Haha! I like the rabbit.
AGH.
Bunny is much too cute for our own collective good (judging by the blo...
lololLLOLOLOLOL WALRUSES
good stuff, seriously.
Excellent points on the angel pic's flaws, Nick and Panda.
Eek! Will do ma'am! Been doing the DSGs actually, traditionally, so ...
Nice update!
I have the same problem with COWCHOWIDWs.
Hand on page one is great, and the nose on the right on page 2 shows s...
SirGreenSockington - Thanks a lot! I tried to keep your crits, especia...
Those manequins are looking good! I especially like the black and whit...
Keep up the mannequin stuff, looking good.
I love the faceless man and the sp of you at the lower left of your la...
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