Posted at March 17, 2005, 9:20 pm:
comment or critique please.
Well im trying to draw more. so i decided to start a sketchbook since there's so much improvement here.
I think i can improve with a a little help, i need some constant pressure to keep up in my sketchebook so...
I'm 17 most of these are from 15, been drawing for along time now, only recentley (year or 2) i started seriously.
this stuff is over a yeat old
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not my best or favorite stuff, butt we all have to start somewhere...
skip a couple of months of pages, i start to pick up some anatomy books.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78.../HeadSkelt.jpg http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...1/Skullsas.jpg http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...aceMuscle2.jpg http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...cemuscles1.jpg http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...tfsketches.jpg
The most recent stuff, month or 2 ago
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...201/2faces.jpg http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78...ecentHeads.jpg
from now on im gonna try to update everypage, only if i keep drawing that is
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Well, my first update:
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16 here, also.
Well, I have been drawing for ten years seriously and more before that...
Ingnito - yeah i tried that on todays sketches, dont know if it worke...
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critiques please.
The last thing could have some potential but as it stands, it has no d...
Your sketches don't have depth - try using a really soft pencil like 6...
BlueMech - that was a doodle but, no excuses! so i decided to change e...
trying new stuff, landscapes instead of anatomy for today
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Hey, man, u got a nice thing going on here! I kinda liked the latest m...
Indeed, nice things going on here.
i was at Co-op and i started to doodle the person infront of me but th...
Hi,
that wacom sketch is great! I'd love to see some more like that o...
cool stuff , you took the crits from people and used it and there is a...
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its not bad but a lot of it seems the same
try things like perspectiv...
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definitely some great stuff for your age!
Just about 10 times better than the stuff i did when i was your age!
hi
good works and much of joy on your drawing !
enjoy it
and .
Thanks for your comments guys, i really appreciate it.
I like your sketchs, but I think some of your drawings need have some ...
I'm trying out charcoal, I have to say I like the resaults.
You have some confident lines going on here.
Thanks van, appreciate the comment.
school started havnt drawn as much as id like, these are from class.
im an awful painter.
Your definately heading in the right direction, just keep going is all...
hehe some really nice lines goin on here.
Thanks guys since someone actually posted in response im gonna post so...
loldoodlelol
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Keep sketchin guy.
Thanks for visiting my thread.
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hey Taj, you should really get a signature with your SB link in it, yo...
Farvus & Gmags - thanks for the comments.
Last one is awesome!
thanks Morbid.
Love your drawings so far.
I think you should draw more faces from reference, because most of the...
wow, youve definitely come a long way since the start of this SB, and ...
Good stuff in here but the last piece could be pushed much more.
i like this one best i think:
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Taj it looks like you came a long way since you start drawing.
SkapeGoat - Thanks ill try to add some more darker values, And the hea...
may i be so bold as to say.
Nope, that wasn't harsh at all, i knew my stuff from the session was a...
Working on prportions and planes
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some nice stuff and nice studies in here, but one thing i would defini...
yeah, definitely really good work for you age, you're doing really wel...
ahhhhhh!!!! the giant heads, THE GIANT HEADS NOOOOOO!!!!
no i can t...
On that last page, your heads look way too big for your bodies.
Oh wow i have 2 pages!
Magic Man - oh my god, magic man in my thread?...
much improved, well done
yeah that thumbnail suggestion is a good o...
hey, that second to last page that you showed, with the guy standing t...
Dose206 - Yeah i notice that stuff now, looks retarded now that you me...
the structure and recogniseable consistency in those are great, well d...
The last update looks cool, but the heads are too big for the bodys.
hey, those faces are looking good, but some of the proportions are sti...
hey dude, you're applying for animation, right? dont know the require...
Ya, I agree with everyone else that the character from each drawing lo...
Hey there Taj, nice progress in your SB, dont give up.
Magic Man, crimsoneye - Thanks man, i appreciate the support.
I really like your more realistic stuff.
woops, good pont, Life Drawing Session.
It looked like it was reffed, but the stylization of the face threw me...
i like the character for your portfolio, give us some more? that life ...
God, i hate how my mind stylizes everything i wish i could erase all m...
Holy shit that's huge improvement for a couple weeks.
I would set up in the, first frame, more of showing how tall that pedi...
Yeah it has to be 4 frames, in the final version im thinking of puttin...
Hurray for more people applying to Sheridan! (I'm applying for illustr...
hey, i'm just gunna critique the 4 frames.
taj, i gotta say, as far as the 4 frames, i think kronos really hit th...
Kronos - I love you.
Hey Taj,
first of all; thanks for your many posts in my sketchbook, i'...
Thanks Noe, your the only one who commented on my mos timportant updat...
Yea mon.
heh, sorry i didn't really get around to critiquing the last story boa...
oh, and the other stuff is really cool.
Excellent studies, both inner and outer body.
I haven't posted here in a long while and I drop by to say those pages...
hey man, good updates.
Sorry I've been away for awhile.
hey Taj!!
keep posting
I won't comment on your storyboards with the a...
Hey there, how are you doing?
will there be an update soon?
am looking...
hey, are we gonna get an update soon? i hope so, cause i wanna see whe...
Thanks for the comments guys/gals (noe) heh
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hey, an update! that's a pretty cool logo thang you've designed there.
Hey Taj,
That is some update! Really nice stuff there.
You've improved a lot.
hey, i hope that the new title of your sb isn't an indicator of someth...
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Those figures are looking pretty nice.
Hey man, I envy the fact that you do so much studies! They really do ...
These are really good life drawing, but one point out in one of them.
ooh very nice!
I agree with Crimsoneye about that leg in the first dra...
Thanks for the comments guys, i agree about the leg.
koroshiya001 - Thanks for the link, I've already seen it though, but i...
very sweet.
Thanks, appreciate the comment.
keeping busy.
Wow! I'm so sorry I didn't post here earlier, but here I am now
On th...
Thanks for the reply Noe, Those legs are starting to frustrate me, but...
hello there sketchmate.
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