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Posted at May 28, 2016, 12:28 am:

it's late. that's my excuse

MONOLIT
john. john doe

Took a low road out of Mendocino in the dead of night
the mountains are small when you're towering in my mind
Thinking of that big sky country, the life we built in Black River field
only so real, gone so long all I've done is dream at the wheel
Traded in my statesman's blues for the raggedy clothes I left behind
buried my rifle in the hands of the hero standing next in line
'cause I'm tired of trying, only thinking of that big sky country
sure to fade, been gone so long all I do is dream awake
Touch the memory dangling from the rearview, only so real
Sure to fade, gone so long all I've done is dream at the wheel
Like a tide-pulled pendulum, I'm falling again
Like a fever sweat, here comes the monolith
Jack surrounding me like a crowd at an accident
Memories flood in, here comes the monolith
Sure to fade, been gone so long all I do is dream awake
Somewhere in the night you'll find me crying-
one tear for the child, one for the bitter man I've become
Heart's ticking like a bomb, here comes the monolith
Touch the memory dangling from the rearview, only so real
Headlights rush in like a tidal-wave, never strong enough to look away
Thinking of that big sky country, the life in Black River field
The walls I built were designed to suffocate. Only ghosts travel roads this late.

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Replies:

You deserve some feedback.

you suck slack.

Dot for laters.

48 hour dot.

I edited it slightly.

The repetition of "only so real" throughout the piece really...

i'm going to hav to go with the crowd and say dot.

MONOLITH john.

okay, i forgot about this, but i said i'd crit it and i will.


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