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Posted at February 27, 2016, 11:11 pm: Yay, new piece...but frankly it's something I have tons of work to do with before I'm fully satisfied. It's just something I wanted to get up here in order for everyone else to input their own thoughts that maybe I oversaw, which is basically the point of posting any work for anyone. Enjoy...I hope Justin B. Hughe August-Septembe “Ink Spills in the Evening” I have a confession to make as blades sweep the lawn, "I found my breath as I searched the straw, the pins were sound and I was strong"; yet sheets still strangle fussy locks, “I swear to you that time's best seen in the evening's dark...” Your hands are dancing with dangerous ink, writing pages that were burned last week. “The sun and the moon are fighting, love, pick a side, win or lose—you’ll sleep fine tonight.” The gun you’re holding is nothing but a branch, so shed its bullets and sleep tight, darling, your mind is tangling, twisting fantasies around the window Your wrist spits filth like a poisonous snake and a cigarette chokes at life as husbands yell and beat their wives, but you stayed calm. Poor people still beg and I cry and hope that they admit that life is but a moment’s drug, pushed on us by ethanol, shopping carts and freeway tolls and as I stare God in the eye, your pen falls to the hardwood floor, with nothing more than the whisper of your chest I had a confession to make, but I'm left breathless, staring at a skyline I thought was sincere. Those needles are left wasted and I lay in fear to catch the sun in my hooded sweatshirt as the key hides in the straw. “I swear to you that time’s best seen in the morning's dark...” Original of the message was taken from http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/ Replies:the most obvious crit i can give is to say that its too much like pros...I know, I just threw it together and I plan on fixing it up a bit. dotted, biatch! I like the prose poem style, it works well. Slam poetry,eh? I quite like this. Other Topics of Sputnik Music:diffrent type of 6l6 tubesspud cannon 2nd day of school and already 4582690 homework assignments wtb:jackson kelly new cymbals Nickelback Please welcome our newest member to the General Discussion community! The Dear Hunter k i just shredded out some mettle a few hours ahgo it was awesome White Rappers? Amp wiring diagrams. Song for Graduation Advice for first electric guitar Feet Set Up Foo Donna Lee accompiament track? what the hells vater? hahahahahahahahahaha Tommy Lee injured by pyrotechnics Giacomo Puccini Happy Birthday to me! Winnipeg Guitarist I brandy new recording :-D Converted my friends P bass to a "Wife" ITT We discuss the CUTEST things in the WORLD!!! Jackson or Fender? Best Pot ITT: A peniz shaped cookie. Suggestions/Questions/Comments Dog Traders, anyone? Klown Itt: Tit ::The WORLD MUSIC Thread:: sensitone Downfall Studio 60 on the Sunset Strip Fantasy Colbert Report League Double Bass Pedal???? What type of chinese food should I get? Just how small a stagestar is... Would anyone like to trade? ATTN: Abnormality Came over from D&P... |