Posted at July 9, 2006, 9:07 pm:
Hello everyone! It's been awhile since I've posted here, I've been so busy lately what with my new job, babysitting my brother, and other things that will earn me money for more art supplies. But enough jibber-jabber, let's cut to the chase:
A few days ago I saw stills from a short film by someone I had never heard of before, Shane Acker. The film was called 9, and try as I might, I could not watch it where I found it because of my stupid dial-up. But the images fascinated me, and I decided to try something in a similar style.
I downloaded some brushes for rust and grime effects, and filtered the sky to look toxic. I was going for a "post-apocalyptic-nuclear-wasteland" sort of look.
But I would like some critique on Mr. Robot God here, and how he can perhaps be made to look more menacing or scary. Of course, showing it to my ever-praising family is pretty much of no use to me anymore. To them, everything I do is amazing. So critique me please!
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A larger version can be found here: http://www.deviantart.com/view/36053270/
Original of the message was taken from http://www.conceptart.org/forums/
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The whole picture seems kinda fuzzy, also the color scheme is all too ...I removed Gaussian blur I had originally put on the outlines (I have a...
I like it.
The rendering's kind of nice, but I think what this needs is more love...
The character lacks depth especially in the legs.
Hmm, I am seeing a repetitiveness (or a theme) in the critiquing, abou...
Okay, so I stared at the "finished" picture for about an hou...
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