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Posted at July 7, 2006, 6:27 pm:

Got some awesome constructive criticism here once before, so thought I'd try again...

The following is to be a submission to TokyoPop. It's not toned or lettered yet.

I was wondering if anyone could offer any criticism (be harsh) on things I should alter/improve before I start toning etc.

Thanks

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page 2


page 3


page 6


The other images are here...

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There are alot of major anatomy issues here.

I got a little confused on page 1, connecting the girl to the guy.

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