Topic: What Lies in Wait: Final Push - what can I fix/push/make better?

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Posted at June 13, 2006, 10:24 pm:

Thanks for looking, first off

Just need new eyes to give me an idea of what I can push or fix in this image. This is probably my most ambitious to date. Understand that I've never done a dress before - so it isn't the best, I realize that! haha! I tried my best.

Anything you guys see that I am not seeing? What can I improve?

(and just a quick note, I HATED this image until I added the cobwebs, then I began to dig it, but only for that... heh)



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