Topic: Subtitles for a Silent Movie WIP

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Posted at July 11, 2006, 11:01 pm:

hello everyone

im working on a book cover for a friends poetry book titled "Subtitles for a Silent Movie."

its still in the rough stages, but ive been looking at it long enough that i cant tell if it sucks or not, so gimme crits!!

i know the rendering is crap, it's not done, so lets just focus on the composition, black-white-grey placement/balance and all that fun preliminary stuff.

thanks!

tear it up, yo.



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