Posted at July 5, 2006, 9:58 pm:
hello everyone i've been coming here for awhile now, just never got around to registering until today lol...anyway, i'm working on a comic entitled "downsh1ft", it involves racing, yadda yadda, ill save that for later...anyway, this is going to be the first cover, and im having a rough time with figuring out whats wrong with this girls face; ive probably been looking at it for too long, so i need others input...lol youll be able to see its a def wip, and im going to add the b/g through the coloring, thats why there's no lineart for it(top is coloring version, bottom is just lineart):
i wanna say its her mouth, and i worked on that mouth for about a hour and a half earlier, but i dunno...feel free to comment/crit anything and if u ned to do a paintover, feel free! thanks!
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Replies:There's far less wrong with her face than with that frightening collec...
her bone structure on her left cheek is too straight.
thank you for your help.
heres a quick update, i re-did her face/neck, and added her hair.
Much better work on her neck.
thank you! yah, im much happier with her neck now.
heres 2 quick updates.
Top version is much better.
heres an update, re-did the linework on alot of parts, fixed some mist...
MUCH better
heres a quick update everyone, ive been busy busy working to get this ...
ok, heres the latest update, carbon fiber is in (and what a pain, too)...
She still looks like she has a couple of sweet potatoes stuffed in her...
thank you for your honest crits elwell, they are def helping alot.
The light source should be the first thing you think about, not someth...
heres the latest update all, tried to fix shading on chest and face, a...
Nice progress! Congreatulation!
But pict still need some correction.
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