Topic: What the f*Ck is wrong with this drawing?

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Posted at June 11, 2006, 7:38 pm:

ok, i'm working on this human torch pic, and i've gotten this extreme sensation of incomfterability about it. i don't know what it is, i don't knw what it has, i just feel uncomfterable, i'm sure you all have felt like that before with some drawing... anyhoo i took a break from drawing and decided to post it here, to see if your unclouded eyes can cast judgement on what the heck is wrong in this pic...



thanks in advanced....

-AW

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