Topic: Reclining pregnant female - Need anatomy crits... or any crits at all, really :)

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Posted at June 15, 2006, 9:41 pm:

Hey all,

Here's a quick sketch I did last night of a reclining female. She's pregnant (if ya can't tell). I kept effing up on her left leg, and I got frustrated with erasing and redrawing constantly, so I decided to take it into photo-shop and push things around. I ended up with a couple edits that I like. Wanted to get peoples opinions before I put paint to canvas.


Original:


Edit 01:
Popped up her right shoulder and lowered her left to give her some more weight. Brought her left leg down more. The drawing on the right is the same, but with some red lines to show her intended motion/weight.


Edit 02:
I kind of took this in the opposite direction. Lowered her right shoulder and raised her left. I also gave her a little more of an "S" motion curve. Again I brought her left leg down, but this one is rotated differently. The drawing on the right is the same, but with some red lines to show her intended motion/weight.


So which one do you guys/gals like better? I can't quiet decide.

Any additional edits you would recommend?

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