Topic: Steampunk Musha Comic pages

Return to Archives of ConceptArt.org Forums

Shared Movies
Over 80 Million Movies and TV-Shows
No Charge per movie, No download limit!		Weight Loss Supplements
Natural supplements that burn body fat,
suppress appetite and support a healthy diet.		Casino Classic
Best Online Casino!
Get $500 free on the house!		Antidepressant Medications
Handle stress, elevate the mood,
treat anxiety disorders.
Posted at October 11, 2006, 11:44 am:

We just posted these 4 preview pages of the Steampunk Musha comic and I wanted to show them off around the forums I frequent to get a better idea of where I need to improve. to be honest, the entire sequential thing is new to me, so I feel i'm still learning to pace myself and develope a panel-to panel storytelling method. I do believe the pages are getting stronger as I progress. . . either way, feedback welcome.

Also, if you are into the whole tabletop rpg thing, check out the Steampunk Musha core book. You can pick it up from our site, or order the collectors edition with original art inside.

www.steampunkmusha.com

thanks

Original of the message was taken from http://www.conceptart.org/forums/

Replies:

The style is strong - great clean linework .

It is in sequence, but it is sort of a "pulp noir" type stor...

ooh how are you going to differenciate with colour?

Not sure yet to be honest, Jeremy Mohler is handling the colors on thi...

Hey Rick, I am having difficulty following the action in the sequence.

Ooh, pulp noir? Interesting.

pretty awesome, i was just wondeirng in the last panel, is the pot goi...

The style isn't quite consistent, panel one looks like an animated car...

Other Topics of ConceptArt.org Forums:

Wacom Intous 3 touch strip question

Concept/Illustrator/Character design/Comic/artist for Hire!!

((Render-a-day)) Auden100, Ryan DeMita, Alaska, SamBrown36

F/S Nokia phones/motorola/samsung phones in store

we be getting HYPHY..ya huurrrd?...uhm yeah +up/70106

VIDEO info for Montreal - please read if youre bringing a camera!!!

Command and Conquer 3: Tiberium wars!!!!

First Post - Ash From Evil Dead Films

Cyberbullying

Reversal Drawing-->c+c please

Shu's Mash [12/07/06]

Flaskpost saying goodbye!

Recent Oils/Landscapes

similar style suggestions?

First time artist

Sandworm's Sketchbook of Doom

Uber sweet tent!

Silent Hill, have you seen it?

Space-station

The Ringling School of Art and Design 2007 Thread

Boston Sketch Group!

Freelance Artist for Comic Saga

Slim..

tree bark texture question

Archipelagos Sketch... Book?

CHOW #30 - VOTING - The most unfortunate lady

which education to choose?

Band logo design, crit needed!

----The good the bad the ugly---- Jair's new sketchbook! 7-12-06

Jens' Life Renderings (26/6 frog princess + troll)

Dreln's Scribllings Part II - June 29

pen pressure problem

Some sketches

Van's Repository [7.13] Oils!

Last Man Standing 2: Round 2 EXTENSION!

Pix's sketch book

Comic to criticise

Hellboy: Cross to the Head *UPDATE 7-5

1st post- intergalatic moogle patrol+others w/anthro boobs

FAQ: The who's, what's and how's regarding the Scholarships. (do not post here plz)

DSG 1101: Sci-Fantasy: PERSON HAS MECHANICAL HOOK-HANDS THAT ALLOW TRAVEL BY CEILING

File Sharing Service  Image Sharing Service  Usenet Newsgroups Reader
Guide to Serials and Shows  English Subtitles For DivX Movies  Lyrics Catalogue
Over 5000 Cocktail Recipes  Hot News Archive  Funny Jokes and Anecdotes
Cooking Recipes Catalogue  Cool Online Encyclopedia  Computer Games Cheats
Pets Department  Spam Free Guestbook Service  Medical Catalogue


Free Web Stats